Areeba Saher zai feature

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FEATURE 

By: AREEBA SAHER ZAI 

ROLL No: 2K15/MC/100(2ND SEMESTER)
SUBMITTED TO: SIR SOHAIL SANGI

GORAKH....
It is located between in BALOCHISTAN AND SINDH..(Only first character of proper noun should be capital)

it is the Hill station of sindh,pakistan.. (First character of proper noun should be capital)

It is situated in kirthar ( its proper noun)mountain
Gorakh hill station is present on the high peak of sindh ( its proper noun).

it is very much attractive place for the nature lovers..and it is very popular  specially for its temperature in summer times(june july ( its proper noun))..

itx temperate weather is too cold in summer season.nd itx beautiful surrondings are really amazing ..

in the winter season the temperature of Gorakh is zero..generally below in 20 °C in summer season..

on itx peak there is also GUESTHOUSES ( its not proper noun)for the visitors ..

and they arrange their own transport from the sehwan sharif ( its proper noun).

it is also located in the northwest of DADU (Only first character of proper noun should be capital) city..and 500 kilometers from karachi (First character of proper noun should be capital).
In the GORAKH HILL (Only first character of proper noun should be capital) areas the abode of wolves are present there..

and itx harmful for the visitors .In the past the wolves were also present in the whole kheerthar ( its proper noun)range ..
In the past the pronunciation was GURKH ( capitalise Only first character) but  nw itx (spelling?)called ''GORAKH"( capitalise Only first character) ..
In the past there was the small temple for the hindus (capitalise first character) and they came for perform the  religious rituals....but now a days there are no any signs of any temple...the gorakh ( capitalise first character) is the pasturing area which have the difficult tracks and the dangerous ways..any transport can not easily go there..visitors needs the ''jeeps'' for face this dangerous area..

The GORAKH ( capitalise only first character) is the only place in sindh which receives the snowfall in winter season and the mountains fully covered with the snow and it creates the natural beauty.

Due to this condition the Government decided to upgrade this place for the peoples because lots of peoples dont (spelling?)know about this place.

Government is trying to maintain there track fo the visitors so that the people of karachi and hyderabad (capitalise first character)can easily go there. 
The number of wolves are present there thats the an other reason its called ''GORAKH'' (capitalise only first character)..and it is the sindhi (capitalise first character) word.